Day by Day

[Fliptastic29]

Little by little let it snow,
Until all mountain tops are covered.

Little by little let it rain,
Until all cities flood.

Little by little let it fog,
Until the blind can see.

Little by little let me be happy,
Until I get cancer.

Little by little let me shine,
Until I die.

[Fliptastic29]

i think i lose it at the end. the last 2 sets of lines.

[Hannibal]

...let it fog
... blind can see

I really like that one. *nods*

This poem would've been a tough one to be very long I think.
I agree - the last 2 could've used some polishing.
Not bad however - and I notice a positive change in some of your style.
Branching out - trying different things... good for you!

Oh, and be here by 3pm at the latest on Friday or i'll kill you. [img]smile.gif[/img]
I can't wait.